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2012-01-11 в 22:42 

jetta-e
"На крышах Форбарр-Султаны шафранный закат померк..."
Начало перевода - от Е.Медведева

Esar, what are you thinking?
You probably forgot.
I'm dead, not even here.
You left my corpse to rot.

And if that memory of yours
Still lists me as alive,
For thirty hard and tiring years
You fought yourself! Goodbye...

2012-02-29 в 21:03 

Borrowing a bit from E. Medvedev's translation here...

Yuri:
For thirty long years you've firmly held the state
And now this great and final deed is chalked up to your slate
So at the last you've reached the end of your victorious road,
You stand prepared to meet your God - but bearing such a load!

Ezar:
There is no doubt the task was very hard
I've sacrificed my child to my duty
I waited and postponed it while I could
But in the end, my son could not survive me

Yuri:
You chose to lose a war for the good of the state
And bury your son's body with the bodies of your fleet
A marvellous plot, what a shame about the price
You couldn't have done it better if you'd asked for my advice!

Ezar:
My son was on the edge of raving madness
We'd have a second Yuri on the throne
Unhindered by the law or even sense
Attacking any who dared oppose him

It was the best thing that I could have done
To stop him before he destroyed the state
My sins are cancelled by my noble ends
I stand by every choice that I have made

Yuri:
Ezar, what are you thinking? You probably forgot.
I'm dead, not even here. You left my corpse to rot.
And if that memory of yours still lists me as alive,
For thirty hard and tiring years you've fought yourself! Goodbye...

- Philomytha

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2012-03-01 в 06:54 

teldreaming
I'd like to work on this Yuri part for a bit - I'm still working on his other song and I'd like the character voicing to match. Ezar's part looks great.

   

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